Article written by Shalini Puthiyedam

Engineer, NGO volunteer, teacher, French linguist, amateur singer, home maker and a world citizen who has aspirations for a just and equal world.

53 responses to “All in a day’s work”

  1. Vipul Grover

    Hi Shalini, welcome to Blog-a-Ton.. Will return soon to read this post but right now dropped by to cnfrm if u are following Blog-a-Ton through the Google Friend Connect (aka Followers widget). If not, plz start doing it asap to bcm eligible for this event.. Just a small tradition :)

  2. Madhu | INDImag.com

    Compelling thoughts and the leitmotif of ‘All in a day’s work’ to bind them :-)

    The poem reminded me of Tennyson’s ‘The Charge of the Light Brigade’

  3. DilonTheRocks

    Ohh..I loved it….Wonderful way to represent all in a days work. I wish we had any way to remove these days out of our history

    1. Shalini

      Hi there.

      Thank you for reading. And yeah…certainly…how i wish we could just erase those days’ work from our history because somewhere the lessons from history are not being learnt.

  4. Bijnu Jacob Kuriachan

    An Awesome Presentation, really to be appreciated, Go on Shalini, waiting more and more from you

    1. Shalini

      Hi there.

      Will sure try to do my best. Thank you for reading and for the appreciation too

  5. Raksha Raman

    Good one! The post is thought provoking and made me think for a while….not just that, it made me travel back in time and recollect reading about the many things mentioned above(viz Tsunami,terror strike et al)..as for the ones which happened in the century bygone, the post sparked my imagination and made me wonder how would it actually feel to witness such things?!?! Phew!! Thinking makes me shudder with sweat!

    1. Shalini

      Thanks for reading. Yes, we shudder to think of these events even. Just imagine the plight of those who lived them! We have to treasure more what we enjoy. :)

  6. Vipul Grover

    Hey Shalini just luvd it.. As it is, I have a weakness for sch poems that portray some events and stories.. The ending about the mother nature’s fury was a brilliant way to bring to an end the humane acts, all in a day’s work!

    1. Shalini

      Hi Vipul.

      Thanks for the read and the very encouraging comments. Will continue to try and do my best. The competition is just by the way. I hope I will have something meaningful to say most times if not always. :)

  7. Poonam

    Blog-a-Ton seems to be nice concept. This is a nice piece of work. Remembered the past.

    I am holding Avant Garde Bloggies Awards here, go nominate your posts (and even your friends’) and participate here:

    http://alchemistpoonam.wordpress.com/2009/12/03/the-avant-garde-bloggies-awards-2009-kick-off/

    1. Shalini

      Hey…that was nice of you to leave a comment. Will take a look at yours too.

  8. prakashkottoor

    shalini i read the article.the comparison is appreciable.It started from heroshima and ends in tsunami most of them in december

    1. Shalini

      Hi Prakash.

      Thank you for the appreciation.

    2. Shalini

      Hey…yes. As i was writing even I was struck by the fact that most events happened in December. Curious coincidence?!

  9. Pushkala

    Wonderfully well-written!

    1. Shalini

      Hey Pushkala.

      Good to hear from you. Thank you for the encouragement.

  10. Psych Babbler

    Loved it! Loved it! Absolutely loved it! The stupidity and selfishness of human beings captured with that one wonderful post!

    1. Shalini

      Hi there.

      Thank you! Thank you! Thank you!. Just thought I’d match your enthusiasm. :) On a more serious note, I am very thankful for the opportunity given to me and I am humbled by the appreciation that has come from so many quarters.

  11. Ashok Banker

    Lovely poem, heartfelt sentiments. Confronts reality head-on, melds poetry with history. A sublime fusion! Write on! :~)

    1. Shalini

      Hi Ashok.

      You can well imagine my complete delirious joy on hearing such fulsome praise from you. Thank you for taking time off to read. :)

  12. Karthik

    Beautifully told!
    Beautiful poem. The emotions have been captured so well in words.
    Loved it to the core.
    All the very best! Cheerios!

    1. Shalini

      Hi Karthik.

      Thank you for the encouragement and the appreciation. I hope I will be able to share honestly whenever I attempt. :)

  13. mahesh kalaal

    sensitive and sensible….
    Touching and quite retrospective
    Contemporary and comprehensive…..
    keep exploring the avenues of more social domains

    1. Shalini

      Thank you Mahesh and I think you’ve written a very good piece too in such few words. Been reading the other posts all through the day.

  14. Renjith P Sarada

    Dear Shalini,

    Good poem…
    Glad to see ‘circa’ in one of the lines.
    Nice of you to remember the national disasters…
    Many people don’t !

    Good Luck,
    Renjith

    1. Shalini

      Hi Renjith.

      Thank you for taking time off to read and comment. I have touched on some international disasters too. My attempt was to capture anything that was accomplished in a day’s work and sadly enough they all turned out to be disasters.

  15. Aneet

    Nice article. Humans are leaving a rather indelible mark on the world!

    thank you for visiting my blog. All I can say is Intelligence, creativity and insanity are all states of mind easily induced with the right application of a certain mind altering substance found in abundance, viz., caffeine!!!

    1. Shalini

      Hi Aneet.

      Yes they are leaving an unpleasant indelible mark…dont you think and do they have a right to is the moot question.

      And hurrah to caffeine for inducing such ingenuous works.

      Thank you for taking time off to read and comment. :)

  16. Nethra

    Wow! It was a wonderful concept. The post was just awesome. Liked it very much. :)
    Cheers!

    1. Shalini

      Thank you Nethra. I am yet to reach your post. :) Have been going through al the competition entries and its not that simple I must admit. To decide that is…:)

  17. Roshmi (Musings of an Unknown Indian)

    Wonderful poem.

    This world have become one giant chess board. Sadly!

    1. Shalini

      Hi Roshmi.

      Thank you for the comments and yeah you are right. The pawns are really the ones who get the worst of all the big shocks. The front line of defence is what gets sacrificed to safeguard the interests of the powerful heavyweights calling the shots.

  18. Sulakshana

    Hi Shalini,

    Nice poem. I like the way it is cited. My thoughts: Man is the only creature of god who can neither live in harmony with his fellow beings nor allows other creatures to live peacefully. Generations he has been fighting for power, money, religion, knowing that he is going to die one day. Now he stands facing the fury of nature, his machine guns, weapons are of no use to him. He has to but helplessly watch nature fury and is now fantically searching way to inhibit other planets…Only nature can teach him the real truth of life…

    I however do believe on one point you made that people fight in the name of religion. Man finds different paths to god but for god all men are one and equal. So it is not ram or rahim or christ…it is man who creates the difference. It also amazes me why people think Shiva only destroys. He is one form of god, and I truly see him as an epitome of love and devotion. He destroys but he destroys ego, pride, all the negative attributes of life. Sathyam, Shivam and Sundaram, Shivam means love. He teaches us to love life through meditation, through yoga , through self realization therby destroying all our unnecessary thoughts. He does not destroy ilfe, he does create difficult paths for us to travel but in the end it is triumph. :) Yes I loved your poem…I guess the two words inbetween raised my eyebrows being a follower:)…Otherwise i really like this poem…

    Regards
    Sulakshana

    1. Shalini

      Thank you Sulakshana for taking time off to read. I used the popular acceptance of the role of Shiva and meant no disrespect with those words. :)

      Thank you for the encouragement and the positive feedback on my effort.

  19. narendra

    that is now really the truth…all in a day’s work you could build wonders and demolish them…but nature still has the PANIC button in her cockpit!! :P nice poem and neatly knit.You dint miss out any major event..and you dint include mediocre ones…although(this is my personal opinion) you could have mentioned some good stuff that happened all in a day’s work..(ahmmm i cant think any this moment…but still..you might just find one.. :P )

    all the best..

    1. Shalini

      Hi Naren.

      Yeah…I agree that its totally dark and believe me I would have liked very much to be able to add a silver lining to the dark cloud but I really could come up with nothing that was a collective positive action all in a day. That was really sad.

      Maybe we can hope that the coming December 12th, the summit at Copenhagen might right that skewed stat and do something positive for once all in a day’s work. Let’s hope. :)

  20. Preeti

    Nicely done! :)
    I’m horrible at writing poems. So I’m always awestruck when I read something as marvellous as this! Loved it! :)
    Preeti

    1. Shalini

      Hi Preeti.

      Thank you for the compliment. And I am too neither a poem writing types. Struggled for a while to come up with something for the topic. :)

  21. Shruti

    Awesome, fantastic!! Loved it to the core!! All the events touched the bottom of the soul!! :)
    Very nice shalini!!

    1. Shalini

      Hi Shruti.

      Thank you for dropping in here. And thank you too for the great encouragement. :)

  22. Pushpee

    Very profound!!!!

    1. Shalini

      Hi Pushpee.

      Thanks for reading the piece and for the compliment too. Said a lot with one word. :)

    2. Shalini

      Hi again.

      Sorry two words. :D

  23. Naveen

    hey really good .. those were indeed history making ‘days’ ….

  24. saimanohar

    nice poem..

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